the digtalztion has become a major tool to futher change our vaules to make us better fatter more complacent cattle."
in this comsumer capltist socity we live in we are told porlby from day one "there is supply and demand" if you supply and no one buys it your are screwed and no one buys your thing so you need the demand. so in this the power is in the demand and who controls that the market. and this new digtal world is now a better way to further controls the demand. poeple are marketed items to futher be marketed too. it is like buying space in your house to put bill roads on. deisres are munpilated through roles that we are expected to play. such as guy are expeted to look big and rape like traits so they buy sport things and exerices to make them bigger.these ecpections play into what they buy and the demands so we see this in commericals and products we buy such as movies, comicsand even stories we here when we are younge. all these excpets play in to being better ad more efishent consumers
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Hopefully I can offer some help. So I'm assuming your thesis is:
ReplyDelete"The digitilization has become a major tool to further change our values to make us better fatter more complacent cattle"
I love that, but I think that you should remove 'The' and just start with digitilation. Also I think that you should include something taht connects to cattle in the thesis as well. Maybe something like:
"Digitization has become a major tool that makes us much like animals, corporate media is slowly changing our values to make us better fatter cattle"
Its just an idea :]
I like how you start your paragraph here, talking about how we are tuaght that everything is supply and demand and everything is about buying and selling and making profit!
What i'm getting is that being digital is making it eaiser for us to be the puppets that are controlled by corporate media?
Great point i completely agree. Maybe a posible out line could be:
1. You explaining how we are already born being taught that we need to buy and sell to make a living
2. How corporate pours their lies in to our pockets to get the money out of our wallets.
3. How we continue to beocme more and more obiedent since we constantly depend on corporate to invent new toys
4. Tie in how we are fed garbage, thus making us animals and you can connect finally how the cattle metaphor works.
I hope I helped. Let me know. I'm really excited to read your paper!